What do you think of the poem and should I send it?

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Question - (18 February 2011)

2 Answers - (Newest, 19 February 2011)

A male age 36-40, *aramba400 writes:

Im in a relationship for about 4 months. We have never fought, we just had miscommunicate sometimes. My Girlfriend got really upset about a text message which I sent to her. It was 8pm and I was very drunk and mad, because we had plans for valentines day go to a dinner and a concert which started at 8pm and she confirmed that she was coming. she didnt respond then I went crazy and start drinking then I sent a stupid text message which made her really upset and then she thought I was comparing her to my ex.

she sent a text message saying the she had a medical situation which is true, I know for sure she had one with me kindey stones, very very painful which you cannot do anything you just got to go to the hospital.

So this is my Sorry poem for her check out if you guys approve it.

Hi. Nicole How are you feeling? I had to do this Im falling apart I had been thinking about a lot Im not a good writer or when I speak English So I worked hard in this text so you understand me

I’m saying sorry for being blinded,

Blinded by the thought, saying blind words.

I'm sorry for everything I have put you through,

I was very hard on you.

I'm sorry for all that's been said and done

I am the earth, you are my sun

I'm sorry for not making everything right

But the situation I was in made me very tight

I'm sorry for not lending you a hand

If only I could be a better boyfriend

I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't care

Im happy someone was there.

I'm sorry for hurting your heart

which deeply I hurt my heart

For forgiveness, where do I start

also she said to me to call her on Sunday she said to me I need to have some time 1 week to think about the text I sent to her she told me Im not ready for relationship bla bla