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reader, SirenaBlusera  +, writes (25 December 2008):
 Di niente, cara. :)
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reader, estanie  +, writes (25 December 2008):
estanie is verified as being by the original poster of the question thanks!
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reader, anonymous, writes (24 December 2008): Sirena's got education, I would jump at the offer if I was you. She's very good at that type of thing. She can help you to make your profile sound really good.
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reader, SirenaBlusera +, writes (24 December 2008):
What Diovan said is right, but would you mind if I looked at it?
Let's see what we've got...
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reader, anonymous, writes (24 December 2008): I is alway's done in capital letter's not small ones... Read out your profile, and then put in spaces wherever you take a breath. Start a new paragraph when you start talking about a new subject. Can't help much more I afraid, I am also real bad at grammar. But it through a grammar or spell check, just like Askoldersis said.
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reader, anonymous, writes (24 December 2008): use microsoft word to spell check.
as for the long paragraph, just leave a line every time you start talking about something different.
also have a look at what other people have written about themselves and how they've structured the layout.
if you like you can message me what you've got so far (no need to include the personal bits - just make something up lol) and ill try to help you lay it out so its not just one big paragraph.
hope this helps and good luck
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reader, anonymous, writes (24 December 2008): Practice Grammar! Though not too much.. after a while people hold you to a new standard. It's cruel.
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reader, estanie +, writes (24 December 2008):
estanie is verified as being by the original poster of the questioni meant to say how do you revise all the information into a paragraph that makes sense and flows better then just a bunch of statements jolted down. cause right now it's all a mess and looks sloppy! but what i do have written down...i want it to be said but i'm wondering how do i rewrite it so it makes sense
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reader, estanie +, writes (24 December 2008):
estanie is verified as being by the original poster of the questionactually...i meant to say...how do i revise all the stuff i wrote. i wrote alot of things that i do want to put in my profile but it's a mess.
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