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writes:I'm really interested in getting your opinion(s) on this poem. It's for a lady who I am really close to , but we are not officially a couple. I already wrote her a love letter and she keeps bringing up the fact that she reads it again and again. I'm confident she will melt, but at the same time, worried it's too heavy. She knows how I feel already, but I guess I'm looking for confirmation from her. Here it is:There's a strange feelinghidden inside my heart.A feeling so strongI must let it out.I crave for your loveno matter how hard.I long eagerly for your love,even though it hurts. My thoughts wonder on and on, while our hearts are in this playful dance. "Do you feel the same for me?" I am certain there is a chance.I'll wait for you though,if it takes so many nights.I'll save my last breath,until the sun no longer shines it's light.I want you to know,I need you to know,I can show youthat you are the one,I can't let go. Reply to this Question
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reader, OscarsMummyReturns  +, writes (30 May 2012):
yes it is beautiful but letter and poem aside what is stopping you two from going on an actual date ?? is she shy - does she have committments?? what you are doing s so romantic but you have to be happy too - can you not ring or write to her and ask her on a date, to a movie of for a meal? if she genuinley likes you she will x
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reader, AuntyAlexxmo +, writes (30 May 2012):
 I think it is a lovely poem! She will be really touched that you put in all this effort for her, lucky girl!
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