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writes:Tell me if you think this is a good poem - DreamsDo you ever dream of something you want but then you turn around and see what youve got theres nothing there but tears and hate you want love but its too late what you must do never hold inside the feelings you have you must not hid tell the truth dont ever lie then youll keep your love alive. Mitchells poemThe first day i ever talked to you i didnt think anything of it but as i got to know you i did something that i never thought would happen.i fell in love.your really amazing and sweeti dont belive i found you someone special up above must be watching for them to send you to me is a blessing i know you loved or love that other girl i would understand if you went back to her dont worry about me i would just cry for the rest of my life but for us to be apart would kill mebut if your happy with her then i dont mined i love you mitchell for now and forever i like how you tell me ywere ment for eachother i never thought you to say tht but im beleiving and all of these reasons that ive come up with are true and thats why i love youTell me what you think about my poems... if you would like me to write you a poem then msg me and tell me what you want it about and yeah thnx
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reader, kellyxxx  +, writes (6 May 2009):
 Those are really sweet. I would like a poem, I've been trying to tell my boyfriend how much I love him so if you could do that for me (well not for me, but in the form of a poem) it would be amazing.x
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reader, anonymous, writes (5 May 2009): You're pretty brave. Posting artsy stuff Online is really opening yourself up to a lot of criticism, warranted or not. I'm no critic, but they seem okay to me. They could use some punctuation, so your reader knows where the pauses should be.
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