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koga 777
writes:nothing seems rightnot the brightness of the mornnor the darkness of nightno one can see my plightas i sit here with simply no delightbecause nothing seems rightno one can see your lightthey mock they snigger with nothing but wicked intenthow is it they can't see what you have doneeverything you have had to endureall that pain with no amorebecause nothing seems rightno one can knowhow i truly feel from my head to my toeif i truly thought you would accept mei would try with all my mightthough i try in my heart i knowthat i'm meant to be here with no one to holdsitting here in blackness darker then nightin my misery in my plightas i sit here with no delighti can still see your light...i will ALWAYS see your light....because it's not fair and nothing seems right. Reply to this Article |
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reader, Lonewolf22X +, writes (13 May 2008):
 I can feel your pain. There are people out there in this world that feels the emptiness or their heart. I always felt like I have no friends, and that became a self-fulling prophecy. That poem is so heavy, it makes me want to cry. you should be a professional poet.
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reader, mandy7  + ♥, writes (10 May 2008):
 Thats beautiful but so very sad I do hope its not the way you feel now hunny, TAKE CARE WITH LOVE MANDY XXXXXXXXXXX
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reader, LJ001 +, writes (9 May 2008):
 Ah michael, another great work of art :]
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