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Hope_123
writes:Wouldn't it be weird..If you knew..About all the things..I could never say to you..It's impossible for me..To see you everyday..When I know that I feel things..Which I cannot say.So I think it would be weird..If you knew..The things that I felt..Right out of the blue.Part of me thinks that I should tell you..When the other screams NO!..But then why would I tell you..If I knew it weren't so.So I write this poem..Because I don't know how else..To tell you how I feel..Or express myself.There are 3 simple words I want to say..But hell, if I said them..You wouldn't half run away!..So if someone told me how to stop feeling these things..I tell you that I gladly would..But whenever I see you a little bell rings..And even though it does me no good..I can't stop how I feel..As I know that it's real.So to finish off I guess I should say..I'm so sorry for telling you this..But there was no other way..Please don't be freaked out..And please don't go..It's been difficult to say this..But I thought you should know! Reply to this Article |
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reader, Hope_123 + ♥, writes (4 May 2008):
Hope_123 is verified as being by the original poster of the question thanks everyone :-)
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reader, Niikkii  +, writes (27 April 2008):
 i absolutely love it reminds me of something.
who did you write this to? if i can know
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reader, anonymous, writes (26 April 2008): Very Sweet poem, millions of all ages and sexes feel like this. But before going for it, analyze the situation. Is the other person already in a relation, is there a realistic hope it may work out? poetry can be therapeutic, get it all out and get on with it, or it can be appropriately a way to prechannel what we should be saying. Assuming you are both single go for it!
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reader, gabriel Alam  +, writes (21 April 2008):
 oh mine this is a poem from haven girl!!!!!!!!! what are you waiting for go give him this poem don't care about what hr might say. just trust urself and go on nothing worthes knowing his feelings about u. look i'm 18 i had a bad relation and i fel like i don't want to be involved in enother one i kept writing poems for her even after we broke up and i'm wishing in this step trhat a girl come and ask me cz i wantr to go out from my misery but not with any girl i want a girl that have the guts to do it. i'm a poet too and i know how much pain u need to write such a lovely nice poem it's about time to end ur pain and take the chance. go ask him as simply as it is ok hope u liked my reply byyy gabe
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reader, anonymous, writes (19 April 2008): That's lovely!
I just want you to know that I understand this completely - and I'm that lots of others do too! x x x
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